​I wanted to post my writing somewhere for feedback. I started writing a few weeks back and keep in mind, that I am not a native English speaker.

All the days I’ve spent thinking about you. All the hours I’ve spent pondering about our differences and similarities.

Although these thoughts and dreams are nothing more than illusions, the illusion of you has escaped my mind and affected the depths of my soul. We have never met, yet you’ve already become an eternal memory. It’s gonna haunt me for the rest of my life. You’re no longer just an illusion; you’ve become real memories in my head.

Although I have never touched your hair. My hand can remember every single strand. Our hands have never touched ,yet I know every single wrinkle and crevice of your palm.

My eyes have never met yours, yet the bright light your eyes give off is not unfamiliar to me.

I wish I could tell you what emotions I hide from you when my eyes notice you in the doorframe. You’re so far, yet I can feel you closer to my heart than anyone else. You’re too deep inside my soul to disappear as easily as anything else.

I’ve once again made the foolish mistake of falling in love.

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