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Need honest feedback on a story i have been working on.
Its Short, its ROUGH. Everytime i type it out i cringe cause my wirting skills are dogwater. But my passion for making this story into reality pushes me to get better and embrace the bad wiritng. Sorry again for the bad wiritng! Phantom Drift Chapter 1: destiny knocks Whenever my father would tell me his…
2″ thick glass or crystal colored pieces, very heavy, approximately 18″×12″.
Just really want to know what these are. It appears that some were glued together. submitted by /u/Alkiest [link] [comments]
If the sun could think, it would think “nothing can replace me” because in its absence, nothing (no thing) exists.
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What are these tiny brown things that keep appearing under my mattress?
Recently replaced my mattress and when i removed my old mattress i saw piles of these underneath it. I cleaned it all and disinfected it before putting my new mattress. A few days later and piles r forming underneath the new mattress. And some even under my pillow. I’m afraid to even sleep submitted by…
Started a business
It’s called Rational Thought and it’s a llc. We offer a bespoke approach that allows people with disabilities and those who have mental illnesses. The idea of the idea started 10 years ago. Just need a business logo OR SOMETHING TO HELP submitted by /u/HardBartyBarty [link] [comments]
Restaurants ought to have a “Half-Life Menu” for indecisive people where half of the items disappear every 2 minutes until you decide
The waiter hands you a tablet with a full menu, and after 2 minutes, half the of dishes vanish. After another 2 minutes, half the remaining ones vanish again… Until eventually, the menu decides for you. submitted by /u/TheSilverBible [link] [comments]
The fact that C-3PO has a seam running alongside his head suggests he is made from deep-drawn stamped sheet metal halves.
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One day in the future people will mix up Vegans and Vegans.
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Rename the “100 Grand” chocolate bar to “200 Grand” to adjust for inflation
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Tears in Rain – A short original poem.
Wretched rain bellows above me and you, a weary gaggle of trepidant youth. Whilst we drift, quiver, checkout and bicker, their foggedy scraps are all we shall hear. ‘There is no rain it doesn’t exist!’, it shall end soon rather; once it’s all fixed. Flung into ferocious wind, what a din, to strike the teddies;…
A Familiar descent
No matter how much you’re crippling inside, no one is going to come by your side. The jaws of grief pain and anxiety grew tight, leaving you with nothing or maybe fragments of light just enough memories to haunt you again, so you can relieve them over and over in pain, you think your exaggerating…
A pair of accessories that looks like earrings
It’s a pair of accessories that looks like earrings with the blocker on one end, but I can’t seem to pop it out or push/pull to seperate the pieces. submitted by /u/Alternative-Glove797 [link] [comments]
Business Name: STOW – Product: World Best Lunchbox – Tag: Built to Carry Better
I’m in the early stages of building a consumer product called STOW and would really appreciate advice from people who have validated a product before manufacturing. The idea is a durable stainless steel lunchbox designed for adults, inspired by brands like Yeti and Stanley — essentially “the last lunchbox you’ll ever buy.” The problem I’m…
How do you make dialogue feel natural instead of forced?
I’ve been trying to improve my dialogue lately, but I keep running into the same problem. it often feels stiff or unnatural when I read it back. When I write conversations, they either sound too formal (like characters explaining things to the reader) or too messy when I try to make them realistic. Real conversations…
If trespassing is allowed then it is not trespassing, so why do we have “No Trespassing” signs?
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New writer here. Would really appreciate honest feedback on this horror opening.
Title: Untitled Horror Project Format: Novel (Opening Scene) Page Length: ~1 page Genres: Psychological Horror / Atmospheric Horror Logline: A loving teacher and mother’s life slowly collapses after a tragic accident destroys the safety of her world, while strange tapping and whispers seem to follow moments of loss. Feedback Concerns: Does the opening create tension…
Brand name: PHOTOGAZE. Does it sound like Photo-GAYS?
I’m not English-native speaker. How much is this misinterpretation likely to happen, 1 to 10? CONTEXT: I am looking for a name for a platform to deeply analyse photos with AI, to help photographers improve their technique and composition. My preferred name is PHOTOGAZE but I’m worried that, when spread by word, sounds like Photo-gays.…
Miniso store franchise
I am looking to earn money in any way. I am great at communication skills and aggressive at finding solutions even under pressure. I recently saw a post of availability of Miniso store franchise in a different city but I don’t know how to get them hire me as a shop owner for their miniso…
Chicken might be the only animal where Googling it often shows pictures of it cooked instead of alive.
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Maybe in another life
My heart is numb. My eyes are tired. I don’t know what to do with this lifeless husk of a man I seem to have become. You were everything I ever hoped for. I loved you when you smiled at the food we had just ordered. I remember the way your face lit up at…
”Storyteller” found at the thrift store – Some kind of radio related equipment, housed in a heavy duty metal case, looks to be from the 70s/80s
Anybody got any clue what this is for? Obviously something to do with recording/radio it seems…found it at the thrift store and it was cheap enough that I let my curiosity win and I bought it. submitted by /u/SideSideHypotenuse [link] [comments]
While being a vegan has a neutral impact on animal suffering, being a cannibal actually decreases animal suffering so long as a meat eater is consumed.
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We all know that antioxidants are good for us.. but we never hear about what is causing all these oxidants in the first place.
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With SSRIs, you rely more on your own serotonin than the actual medication.
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You know you are overthinking when a simple text turns into a full conversation in your head.
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You never end a sentence like “…that’s just the way I’m”. Even though “I’m” means “I am”
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Anyone got any good writing course recommendations in Chicago?
Courses or workshops or even writing groups have always been helpful for keeping me on track. It can be frustrating to relearn the same things over and over but I find myself writing and finishing so much more often in a classroom environment! Major ADHD head submitted by /u/Spooksandgiggles [link] [comments]
In 2006, a ringing phone was a social invitation. In 2026, it’s a suspicious activity report.
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People always talk about “active shooters” but you never hear anything about “inactive shooters”.
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Found in a goodwill in AZ… wooden horse racing game board of some kind? The horses slide, there was nothing attached with it either
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How to make an ai influencer and actually turn it into a real business?
I get the concept, build an ai character, post content, monetize through brand deals and affiliate stuff. I have a marketing background so the funnel side makes sense. But the actual content creation and execution part is where I’m stuck. For anyone doing this, what does the day to day actually look like and is…
I quit my job to run an AI Influencer business, $0-$15k/month (SFW)
Hi guys! Just to give you some backstory, I’ve tried pretty much everything over the years like most of you. Dropshipping, print on demand, affiliate marketing, YouTube automation, faceless channels, etc. Made maximum a few hundred dollars with each before quitting. Most of it is way more complicated than influencers or “gurus” make it sound.…
I wonder how much debate it took for the original PI proofs to be accepted as fact. Because to prove a constant, you’d have to show that dividing by r^2 always yields the same #. With an infinite decimal, even using sig figs, wouldn’t people argure you can’t be certain it’s 100% the same every time?
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How do you write scenes that feel alive instead of just describing events?
Lately I’ve been noticing something in my own writing. When I draft scenes, they often feel like I’m just explaining what happens rather than letting the reader experience it. For example, I’ll write something like “they argued for a while and then left,” but when I read other writers’ work the scenes feel much more…
Birth control pills should be named “pregnancy control pills”
You can’t control something that doesn’t occur… submitted by /u/flopsyplum [link] [comments]
Post nut clarity may be a side effect of people with ADHD being able to concentrate during dopamine spikes.
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The longest red light of all time must necessarily have also been the longest green light of all time.
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Private surveillance equipment is now so cheap that it’s more rational to assume that a given airbnb is recording your every move than not.
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Private surveillance equipment is now so cheap that it’s more rational to assume that a given airbnb is recording your every move than not.
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(Essay) Salt Spray, Sex, & Sunscreen
“Salt Spray, Sex, & Sunscreen Expectation vs. Reality vs. Truth” by Josiah Osborne ————————————————————————— The sky is deep gray. The sand is dry and grainy beneath my toes. The great Atlantic roars in every direction, alive with something almost divine. Had my shoes still been on, off they’d go. This is holy ground. The first…
It is highly likely that you never pressed the 8 button on a microwave.
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I sell AI images to men and make over $10k/month
I started the AI influencer business over 8 months ago, now running a few with my 2 friends. What I didn’t expect was how many men there are out there willing to drop thousands of dollars on basic pictures. The funny thing is that many of them probably suspect the images are AI as I…
Get rid of Israel and Palestine and put a giant theme park on the space. Excellent food establishments and ample parking. It could be called Promisedland.
Those two are always at each others throats and to be honest I’d rather that land created joy and not despair. Open to any discussion. submitted by /u/HardBartyBarty [link] [comments]
Guide me please…
I live in India and I’m thinking about starting a small cross-border ecommerce business. The idea is simple: buy products that are easily available and cheap in India, then sell them to US/EU customers through Instagram shops, Etsy, or direct shipping. So basically retail arbitrage / export arbitrage. If you were starting this type of…
It’s mathematically impossible to be exactly one third from a given origin, no matter how many generations back and how many ancestors you’re counting.
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