​I need feedback for my concept

Hello, I’m currently writing a story I started a long time ago, but I wanted to change the format. I want to make it a story where the reader has to unravel the lore. My story begins with the announcement of the deaths of the protagonists’ parents, and we follow them as they try to find their parents’ murderer. I want to make it a complex story, a bit like the FNAF series, where the community tries to guess who the real murderer is. I don’t know if my message is clear, but do you think this is a good idea? In addition to the text, I’d like to add newspaper clippings and photos to enrich the story.

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