​My first ever story

[Complete] [67756] [Horror/Psychological] Focus Group Part One

The story altogether includes sexual implications, sexual topics, foul language, graphic violence, brutality. Self harm in some instances. Please be advised.

The story itself follows a male escort by the name of Robin Vance. He is a young man living in poverty doing this line of work for his terminally ill sibling. One night he is offered a chance for volunteer work by a massive pharmaceutical company named “Haven”.

The work while ambiguous offers such a high amount of money he can’t refuse. The volunteer work however, is under the table assessments using Haven’s own mental patients. The story itself would entail psychological horror along with violence and tension.

Google Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hzxbZH6jFn5MhFNuInuM\_21vBH62adigGlbzLzTIiOc/edit?usp=drivesdk

I’m looking for general feedback

I am no professional writer by any means I just enjoy telling stories but I’ll gladly read something of yours if you read something of mine. (I don’t mean my whole story)

Hope you enjoy if you read it.

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