​My very first attempt at poetry. Would love to hear your thoughts on where I started.

Hey everyone,

I’ve been writing for a while now, but I recently dug up the very first poem I ever wrote when I was just starting out.

It is incredibly simple and relies on some very classic tropes, but I wanted to share it here. It’s completely unpolished and raw, just a snapshot of me trying to figure out how to put emotions into words for the first time. I’d love to hear your critiques or if you remember what your own very first pieces looked like compared to how you write now!

: My love :

My love is for you.

Deeper than the sea

Higher than the sky

Bigger than the universe

Longer than the Numbers

Brighter than the Sun

Sweeter than the sugar

Beautiful than the Rose

Safer than the house

Purer than the water of Rain

And precious than my life <3

Thanks for reading 🙂