​Amaranthine

I am a beginner at writing poems (I usually write short stories) so I’d love some feedback on this!

Amaranthine

Let us remember for once more And let’s keep breathing for now To feel all that we used to have As I don’t know how to drown

Let us remain here in this dream Just sleep for a bit longer Just until the rainstorm settles, And the world is finally over.

Let me listen to your heartbeat, Feel its echo on my palm We can stay here until it dies Floating in its sacred psalm.

Let me touch on your spirit now With my iridescence hands I get lost in kalopsia As the dust of our soul blends

I’ll let you look at my bare skin, See my face without a mask Just please don’t leave me here alone That’s the only thing I ask.

I’ll let you strike me with moonlight As you make me feel alive And I think I am a person When I know that you’re around.

Let our souls become starfire When the world falls silent, dark I won’t be alone anymore, As I’ll carry you in my heart.

Let the lone stars now fall from grace, And forget about their celestial place, With the end, let me sleep on your chest Oh, love, where I can finally rest.