I’ve been making this story since I was an 8th grader (now a junior) yet I find myself attempting to redo the past and getting stuck. So I want the opinion of the internet to help me figure out if my current story is good, or if they have ideas I could fix.
My main character, Tatsuya, lives in a vast fantasy world, where people can take on the jobs of Hunters. The highest rank of a Hunter is a Prime Hunter, which can only be achieved by completing one of the S++ Missions. Tatsuya decides to find the Beast Gems, which grant the collector’s greatest desires and becomes a prime hunter. He gathers a team and becomes an official hunter, but while traveling, he finds the tomb of Ahddub, the strongest Flow User, (Flow is my power system). He found a lost prophecy containing the end of the world, which would be brought about by Slayer, a Flow User who has been alive for 4000 years. Tatsuya then decides he will find Ahddub’s weapon, the Flow Force, which allowed him to be the only person to beat Slayer in history. Slayer figures out Tatsuya figures out and captures him. There will be the main conflict leading to Slayer mysteriously disappearing, and Tatsuya continuing on his journey to find the Flow Force to ensure he can stop the end of the world.
Any help would be great. Please and Thank You.
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