I wrote these poems in 1 writing session and wanted to share them as a small collection. I’m curious if the imagery works and whether the emotions and mood come through. Feedback is very welcome.
The Lonely Shop
Every day I walk by and every day I stare.
But it’s still there,
among the tat and titter,
a stubborn shadow,
refusing to fold into the clutter.
It glitters and shines, the bright spark.
Radiating a bygone time,
a memory to my soul…
But, every day,
all I do is walk and stare.
No matter wind, rain, or shine,
a tiny glimpse brings refrain.
But it is not mine,
not to hold, not to bare.
My time is gone,
and every day,
I walk by and stare.
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No Equal
The cat stalks.
It’s time to hunt.
It struts from house to house,
every door wide,
every threshold inviting.
Fawnish, foolish humans.
Greetings with ever-widening smiles.
Food is always offered.
A purr, a cuddle—
we tremble in delight.
Foolish humans.
I have no master, no equal.
I stalk and I hunt,
and you…
you are mine.
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Vague!
Vague!
You’re too vague!
I am?
Yes, you are.
Show more commitment,
show passion.
Much more Upmh!
More Upmh?
Yes, more,
much more!
You hide,
you cower;
you skulk!
What are you,
man or mouse?
It’s time to stand,
time to be proud.
Do not cry,
do not cower,
because already—
you’re too vague.
Am I?
But I’m not hiding.
I’m not cowering.
I am me.
We’re not all heroes;
can’t all be superstars.
I don’t want to be special.
I don’t want to be famous.
I just want to live.
I’m not vague—
accept me.
I am standing.
I’m proud.
I am what I am.
This
is
me.
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