​Hello 🙂 I’ve recently started practicing writing odes/poetic letters/poems, could you give me your opinion on this one? Have a good day everyone ☺️

– Ephemeral – The rose bows to the morning breeze,

And dawn trembles on the sea of ​​memories.

O heart, may your sorrow be sweet and your grief Like a dream that the wind brushes against and then flees.