Wretched rain bellows above me and you,
a weary gaggle of trepidant youth.
Whilst we drift, quiver, checkout and bicker,
their foggedy scraps are all we shall hear.
‘There is no rain it doesn’t exist!’,
it shall end soon rather; once it’s all fixed.
Flung into ferocious wind, what a din,
to strike the teddies; invoke the wailing.
Snow and hail too, didn’t you know?
The gambler’s wager we endlessly owe.
Would love any feedback, realised that hear only rhymes with bicker if pronounced hee-yah instead of the more traditional pronunciation. Unsure about the word youth also but couldn’t really think of anything else that fits and doesn’t already signify a group or large gathering. Feedback much appreciated!
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