This is my first attempt at writing fantasy-ish poetry. Any feedback or help is appreciated a lot!
The sapphire sun
The sapphire sun surfaces just once a month
When the blazing sun is tired and needs to be re-fired
Forlorn and gloom, the only source of light
Like a fiery beacon to make the villagers fright
And not one soul would leave their walls
Besides the farmer, cherishing the emerald rays
Which make his garden bloom and sway
As he puts together a bouquet
Which delights his mistress away
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