​What do you think of my Infernal Devices fanfic draft so far?

Genres: Urban Fantasy, Historical Fantasy, Young Adult, Adventure Fiction, Psychological Fiction, Psychological Horror, Science Fiction, Steampunk Themes: mental health, mental illnesses, corruption, poverty, suffering & violence, gender norms, good vs. evil, family, friendship, death & grief, isolation & loneliness, courage & perseverance, fear, free will, human perception, racism & race, sexism, identity & belonging, survival, neglect, human nature, hope vs. despair, alienation, ambitions, classism, greed, guilt, hypocrisy, ideology, mortality, personal development, reality, Christianity, self-reliance, unconditional love, xenophobia, youth, faith, man vs. nature, man vs. man Story structure: Kishōtenketsu Plot: This Infernal Devices fanfic & spin-off takes place in an alternate universe in London, England, twenty-one years after the original series, following the lives of four teenagers: Eva Lu, Fredrick Lu, Rosa Lu, and Tracy Cheyne. Eva and her twin siblings discover that they are a special race of humans with angel blood known as Nephilim, with the Lu family being descendants of the angel, Azrael. The year is 1899, an era of imperialism and nearly the beginning of the 20th century. The world is corrupted by supernatural creatures, greedy politicians, hypocrisy, and violence conflicted from both man and nature.