​New to writing, any comment/critique much appreciated

Ear bent to a black hole

Whirring depthlessness

Explorations of heaven

Reveries on the nature of light

Temporal ripples glimmer through the concrete

Oceanic fabric,

Gates arise

All one ought to do is ask

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It is intent that penetrates reality. Even if every mind misses it, if every soul was looking the other way , observing the figures actions as if a slight of hand trick, it was only intent that punctured the great silence, the great in between, no matter what useless din of any action.

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