Hi guys. I’ve recently started writing a novella which is my first time writing in the first-person narrative. I want to get some feedback on the flow, the nonlinear format, the dialogue, and what you think the main gist of the piece is about so far (because I’m kind of making it up as I go along, which is also a first).
The document is in a comment! Thanks!!!
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