​This one is for you and you know that it’s true!

Your poetry, it sucks

The tone, the lyrical embodiment of the construct in which you write is juvenile and comes across as attempting.

Like brown-nosing shit fermenting
Yeah I’m jaded and foul towards your entity

but you’ll never be able to hide your identity
I see through you like a dog running into the backyard glass door

I get knocked down but I never hit the floor
You’ve taught me so much but you are not a mentor

Nice try my friend, or should I say my neighbor?

BY: Yours Truly

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