Your poetry, it sucks
The tone, the lyrical embodiment of the construct in which you write is juvenile and comes across as attempting.
Like brown-nosing shit fermenting
Yeah I’m jaded and foul towards your entity
but you’ll never be able to hide your identity
I see through you like a dog running into the backyard glass door
I get knocked down but I never hit the floor
You’ve taught me so much but you are not a mentor
Nice try my friend, or should I say my neighbor?
BY: Yours Truly
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