Writing a story about a zombie like invasion in 1400’s during the hundred years war in France. I need feedback, this is my first story.
[PROLOGUE] I do not even remember when it started, I just know that I was on guard duty that day. Word had reached our fortress that punishment from the heavens has been cast on the capital. Normally, we did not think much of it. Our fortress is considered to be among the holiest in the…
An AI-powered sex machine
An AI-powered sex machine that monitors your vital signs in real time to optimise fucking speed so that you can enjoy a nonstop, throbbing, shattering orgasm until you beg it to stop (there should also be a function where you can determine how “naughty“ it is going to be). submitted by /u/HolyFatherLeoXIV [link] [comments]
Weekly Free For All Thread – Spam your business – Post your surveys – Tell us about your awesome MLM scheme – [UNMODERATED POST] (except for site rules of course)
Hey r/Business_Ideas! Welcome to Small Business Sundays! This is the ONLY place you can solicit on this subreddit, so feel free to plug your business and services here and get the word out about your offerings! You should try to include: your industry your experience (or portfolio) the type of customer you’re looking for any…
Desire of a lady ?
She is a body, Yet she carries a soul,. Men know her only, Through the curve of her form, Touch only the surface, Never the purest part within. All hunt her shell, Praise her fleeting beauty, While her soul remains untouched, Radiant, immaculate, A light so pure, It could awaken yours, Kindle the eternal flame,…
We should have “cleaning parties”
I’m not good at cleaning and it gives me anxiety. I have an especially difficult time cleaning after I’ve let things pile up. I think that “cleaning parties” would be a good idea. You could have a bunch of friends/family over and at the start of the night your house will be messy but by…
Is it just me or does every “make money online” advice assume you love being on camera?
I went down a rabbit hole recently watching videos about side hustles and something started to feel strange. Almost every single strategy revolves around becoming some kind of online personality. YouTube channels, TikTok talking videos, personal brands, lifestyle content… basically putting yourself in front of an audience all the time. But what if you’re just…
He Grew in My Hamper
I’m not very keen on grooming I’ll admit. I reuse outfits to put off doing laundry, so the first things to go in the hamper, sit there for a while. Across reddit, I’ve seen hundreds of pics where mushrooms and mold grow on people’s clothes, this thing had the same ingredients but was no mushroom.…
Handling ADHD with writing!
Hello all! So I have ADHD, and keeping up with my writing has always been a hard task to accomplish for me. For those of you in the same boat with ADHD and wanting to write a long-form novel, how do you proceed with it? I always find myself getting stuck and when I get…
A sad man talks to God
Man: When I was a boy, I was raised on a diet of my father’s fists and my mother’s curses. Weeping, and alone, locked in a dark room, soaked in my urine, I wandered clumsily, and wondered what a life this was. Were you with me then? God: You move forward through time with your…
We building physical simulation tank for a 4-player, How do I ensure high replayability and keep customers coming back?
My partner and I are currently developing a Modular Simulation Tank project to make it a buisness simulation. We’ve already locked down the mechanical immersion. but now we’re facing the real battle: the gameplay. We are designing a 50 minute experience for a 4-player crew (Driver, Gunner, Loader, and Commander). Each player has their own…
You’ve heard these stories from the Holy Books. Now hear them from the Devil
Everyone knows the story of Adam and Eve. God said: “Do not eat the apple.” The Devil tempted them. They ate. They were cast out of Paradise. But what did the Devil actually say that day? From my novel, in Sebitziyu’s own words: — Gabriel said “You shall not eat from the Apple!” And I…
2″ thick glass or crystal colored pieces, very heavy, approximately 18″×12″.
Just really want to know what these are. It appears that some were glued together. submitted by /u/Alkiest [link] [comments]
Need honest feedback on a story i have been working on.
Its Short, its ROUGH. Everytime i type it out i cringe cause my wirting skills are dogwater. But my passion for making this story into reality pushes me to get better and embrace the bad wiritng. Sorry again for the bad wiritng! Phantom Drift Chapter 1: destiny knocks Whenever my father would tell me his…
If the sun could think, it would think “nothing can replace me” because in its absence, nothing (no thing) exists.
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What are these tiny brown things that keep appearing under my mattress?
Recently replaced my mattress and when i removed my old mattress i saw piles of these underneath it. I cleaned it all and disinfected it before putting my new mattress. A few days later and piles r forming underneath the new mattress. And some even under my pillow. I’m afraid to even sleep submitted by…
Started a business
It’s called Rational Thought and it’s a llc. We offer a bespoke approach that allows people with disabilities and those who have mental illnesses. The idea of the idea started 10 years ago. Just need a business logo OR SOMETHING TO HELP submitted by /u/HardBartyBarty [link] [comments]
Restaurants ought to have a “Half-Life Menu” for indecisive people where half of the items disappear every 2 minutes until you decide
The waiter hands you a tablet with a full menu, and after 2 minutes, half the of dishes vanish. After another 2 minutes, half the remaining ones vanish again… Until eventually, the menu decides for you. submitted by /u/TheSilverBible [link] [comments]
One day in the future people will mix up Vegans and Vegans.
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The fact that C-3PO has a seam running alongside his head suggests he is made from deep-drawn stamped sheet metal halves.
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Tears in Rain – A short original poem.
Wretched rain bellows above me and you, a weary gaggle of trepidant youth. Whilst we drift, quiver, checkout and bicker, their foggedy scraps are all we shall hear. ‘There is no rain it doesn’t exist!’, it shall end soon rather; once it’s all fixed. Flung into ferocious wind, what a din, to strike the teddies;…
Rename the “100 Grand” chocolate bar to “200 Grand” to adjust for inflation
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A Familiar descent
No matter how much you’re crippling inside, no one is going to come by your side. The jaws of grief pain and anxiety grew tight, leaving you with nothing or maybe fragments of light just enough memories to haunt you again, so you can relieve them over and over in pain, you think your exaggerating…
A pair of accessories that looks like earrings
It’s a pair of accessories that looks like earrings with the blocker on one end, but I can’t seem to pop it out or push/pull to seperate the pieces. submitted by /u/Alternative-Glove797 [link] [comments]
Business Name: STOW – Product: World Best Lunchbox – Tag: Built to Carry Better
I’m in the early stages of building a consumer product called STOW and would really appreciate advice from people who have validated a product before manufacturing. The idea is a durable stainless steel lunchbox designed for adults, inspired by brands like Yeti and Stanley — essentially “the last lunchbox you’ll ever buy.” The problem I’m…
How do you make dialogue feel natural instead of forced?
I’ve been trying to improve my dialogue lately, but I keep running into the same problem. it often feels stiff or unnatural when I read it back. When I write conversations, they either sound too formal (like characters explaining things to the reader) or too messy when I try to make them realistic. Real conversations…
If trespassing is allowed then it is not trespassing, so why do we have “No Trespassing” signs?
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New writer here. Would really appreciate honest feedback on this horror opening.
Title: Untitled Horror Project Format: Novel (Opening Scene) Page Length: ~1 page Genres: Psychological Horror / Atmospheric Horror Logline: A loving teacher and mother’s life slowly collapses after a tragic accident destroys the safety of her world, while strange tapping and whispers seem to follow moments of loss. Feedback Concerns: Does the opening create tension…
Brand name: PHOTOGAZE. Does it sound like Photo-GAYS?
I’m not English-native speaker. How much is this misinterpretation likely to happen, 1 to 10? CONTEXT: I am looking for a name for a platform to deeply analyse photos with AI, to help photographers improve their technique and composition. My preferred name is PHOTOGAZE but I’m worried that, when spread by word, sounds like Photo-gays.…
Chicken might be the only animal where Googling it often shows pictures of it cooked instead of alive.
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Miniso store franchise
I am looking to earn money in any way. I am great at communication skills and aggressive at finding solutions even under pressure. I recently saw a post of availability of Miniso store franchise in a different city but I don’t know how to get them hire me as a shop owner for their miniso…
Maybe in another life
My heart is numb. My eyes are tired. I don’t know what to do with this lifeless husk of a man I seem to have become. You were everything I ever hoped for. I loved you when you smiled at the food we had just ordered. I remember the way your face lit up at…
”Storyteller” found at the thrift store – Some kind of radio related equipment, housed in a heavy duty metal case, looks to be from the 70s/80s
Anybody got any clue what this is for? Obviously something to do with recording/radio it seems…found it at the thrift store and it was cheap enough that I let my curiosity win and I bought it. submitted by /u/SideSideHypotenuse [link] [comments]
We all know that antioxidants are good for us.. but we never hear about what is causing all these oxidants in the first place.
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While being a vegan has a neutral impact on animal suffering, being a cannibal actually decreases animal suffering so long as a meat eater is consumed.
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With SSRIs, you rely more on your own serotonin than the actual medication.
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You know you are overthinking when a simple text turns into a full conversation in your head.
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Anyone got any good writing course recommendations in Chicago?
Courses or workshops or even writing groups have always been helpful for keeping me on track. It can be frustrating to relearn the same things over and over but I find myself writing and finishing so much more often in a classroom environment! Major ADHD head submitted by /u/Spooksandgiggles [link] [comments]
You never end a sentence like “…that’s just the way I’m”. Even though “I’m” means “I am”
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People always talk about “active shooters” but you never hear anything about “inactive shooters”.
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In 2006, a ringing phone was a social invitation. In 2026, it’s a suspicious activity report.
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Found in a goodwill in AZ… wooden horse racing game board of some kind? The horses slide, there was nothing attached with it either
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How to make an ai influencer and actually turn it into a real business?
I get the concept, build an ai character, post content, monetize through brand deals and affiliate stuff. I have a marketing background so the funnel side makes sense. But the actual content creation and execution part is where I’m stuck. For anyone doing this, what does the day to day actually look like and is…
